The Touch of Your Lips - Ray Noble

[charman]

The Touch of Your Lips by Ray Noble

[raymb1]

The Touch Of Your Lips - Ray Noble

[engelbach]

raymb1:

I love what you did with this tune, structuring it as Swing Two-Four and starting the head with a G pedal point. Rhythmic variation adds a lot to the tune. It's too bad there's no such thing as a double Coda so you wouldn't have to write the whole head out again.

The chord extensions were a little hard to read, overlapping the bar lines and each other. I took out the unnecessary 7ths, since they're understood in dominant 7th and half-diminished 7th chords, which freed up a lot of space to spread things out more.

Touch Of Your Lips-Rev JE, The - Ray Noble

Cheers,
Jer

[raymb1]

Thanks Jer. I forget that I don't need to look at the chart myself.